Thunder rumbled like marching giants and a lightning bolt set the sky ablaze. She leaned in, closed her eyes, and inhaled deeply smelling the aroma of roses mixed with dirt and imminent rain. She loved the scent of raw earth and admired the power of nature.
The rose bushes on Martin’s unmarked grave had grown immensely in a relatively short time. They helped to hide the sadness of loss with their thriving spirit.
It was two years passed, on another stormy night, when the Goddess decided Martin was not meant for this world. Alone, she screamed with the raging storm as his lifeless body emerged. Far from town and with no friends or family to speak of, she mourned unaccompanied and processed her grief as her tears fell with the pouring rain.
Martin’s father had gone off to sea before he knew she was with child and had not returned, so alone she buried his little body and planted roses to give him life after death.
She reconciled with the earth and accepted the necessary balance within the universe. Though she could not fully understand the plans of the Goddess, she recognized that there was an order to it all, beyond her comprehension.
The rain finally began to fall. She sat by the rose bushes on the damp ground with legs crossed. She hummed a tune and ran her hands through the soil as she turned her face toward the sky and let the cool liquid wash over her. Alone she praised the Goddess and felt her heart at peace.
– Written for YeahWrite.me Weekly Fiction|Poetry Writing Challenge #268 Inspired by Prompt up sentence “She closed her eyes to smell the phlox.” WC 260. Photo by Geoff Livingston. “The Nature of Things” won 3rd place by popular vote in this contest.
How coincidental! For this week’s challenge I also wrote an entry relating to the ocean and it taking someone away. I really like your diction in this and the story idea in general.
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Thank you! Looking forward to reading your entry 🙂
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I like how you left it to the reader to surmise that “she” is Martin’s grieving mother.
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Thanks! 🙂
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I loved all the description and the strange calm and acceptance the mother seems to feel. It was eerily beautiful.
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🙂 thank you!
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You’re welcome! So many great posts this week!
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This was so beautiful, Leara! A mother grieving for her child, I’m so glad she found peace, if only for some time!
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Oh, thank you! Thanks for reading!
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I like how you are able to show her strength by the way she reacts to circumstances. Also nature as the healer, yes.
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Thank you, thank you!
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Evocative and spare. Wonderfully wrought.
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Thank you!
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Wow! Such amazing talent!
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I love the organic feel to the entire story, and how the water imagery ties it all together.
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Thank you for the feedback!
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Somehow you were able to capture sweet melancholy in this. It’s spectacular!
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Thank you!!
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