“What are you doing, mama?” Little Lollie asked.
“I am raising the sun sweetheart, just like I do every morning, silly girl.” Mother replied giving little Lollie a smile as she continued slowly lifting her arms skyward.
“Watch it dawn, and pay close attention. We mustn’t move too fast.”
Lollie watched with wide eyes in awe of the regal woman before her.
“This magic will be yours one day, and the sun will rise and set at your command. Remember not to worship the power of our ability but respect the relationship we have with the sun.”
“So pretty mama!” She giggled, her ringlets bouncing against her forehead.
“Yes it is sweetheart, and it has so much work to do during the day. We will come back and set it once it is finished.”
Task complete, mother took Lollie’s hand. “Do you feel its strength pulsing through you?”
“Yes!” Lollie shouted and stomped her feet in excitement. “I can’t wait til sunset so we can put the sun back to bed so it can rest.”
Mother grinned proudly at her vivacious little girl.
– Written for Jane Dougherty Writes, Microfiction Challenge #13: Woman in the sun. Painting prompt by Caspar David Friedrich. Prompt words were dawn, sunset, worship, magic, power, regal. WC 183.
That is a surprising one! It’s true, the raised hands do look as though she’s giving a command to the sun.
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Thank you! I love the painting. Could go so many ways.
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I like your vision here!
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Thank you!
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Vivacious, I love that word. Great story.
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What a beautiful story. Full of joy and life.
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Thank you for reading!
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Sweet!
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Sweet was my thought too. Lots of warmth and joy. (K)
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Such a sweet story. I like that the mother is regal without being overbearing, and she and her daughter have such a loving relationship. I also thought that the woman could be giving some sort of command or ritual.
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Thank you!
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I really enjoyed your delightful tale…so well done..
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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