She wrapped her scarf and sighed visibly in the morning air.
On the recurring drive, she replayed the first visit. Tubes, wires, alerts of all kinds overwhelmed them.
The season closed with a new beginning; baby is finally coming home.
– Written for YeahWrite Microprose Challenge #434. Prompt was to tell a story in exactly 40 words that evokes a specific season without using the names for that season.
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This is sweet. 🙂
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Thank you!
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I like how this has ended on a happy note despite the chill in the air 🙂
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Yes! Thank you.
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I feel like this is a true story and I’m celebrating the baby coming home!
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It definitely is. Thank you 🙂
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Yay for tough, sweet babies! I loved how clearly I could feel the worry and the joy.
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Thank you! 😁
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What a lovely feeling this evokes. You did a very nice job of showing the emotional shift.
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Oh, thank you!
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I loved how you showed the season in just two words: “sighed visibly.” I could picture her breath coming out in the cold air. Nicely done!
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😁
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I like the way you transitioned from one season to the next. That was a nice positive spin.
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Thank you! It’s a true story.
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